BJ's proposal

Writing a proposal for a flyer – Surveillance in Clay-school

This flyer should address the teachers and students from clay school. Do you want to be seen everywhere in every place nevertheless it’s private or open?  Cameras are okay BUT not at all extents. We just need cameras where there are necessary. So when the students will read the flyer carefully it will convince them to vote the correct way. A WAY FOR SECURITY AND PRIVACY.

To catch the reader’s attention we decided to put an image or illustration of two cameras on the top of the flyer. It also stresses which with problem we have to deal.

All the words which are written in red or were been underlined are words which emphasis the problem of being seen everywhere at every time.  The language which should be used is appealing to the students and very easy to understand. The letters are large so it’s easy to read for all.  

The students should vote. So the table below should facilitate the voters for choosing the correct way. It shows that it’s okay to have cameras in playgrounds, halls, entrances and classrooms to stop vandalism and violence BUT that it is not correct to put cameras in private places like the changing room in the gym, the toilets, or student-/ teachers lounge. 

All in all the camera on the top catches the reader’s attention. The question below: How can we still differentiate between surveillance and voyeurism in school? stresses the topic we worked with. And the table below shows and should convince the students that a way of security and privacy is possible and the arguments in which parts of the school convince them.